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IRONPIERCER_Pilot

TV PilotSci-Fi49 pages

An 18-year-old girl leaves an AI-ravaged Earth, inherits the combat memories of a dead pilot, and uncovers a conspiracy on a hostile colony world. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZeaBOJi6OQ

Script title: IRONPIERCER

Written by: Based on the novel "The Spear That Swallowed Metal"

IRONPIERCER

Based on the novel "The Spear That Swallowed Metal"

Pitch: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OZeaBOJi6OQ Written by Jaehyun Kim Contact: [email protected]

LANGUAGE NOTE: Unless otherwise indicated, dialogue between Korean characters is spoken in Korean and is presented in English for readability.

FADE IN:

EXT. DISTRICT 47 - SECTOR 45 - DAY

Two older gray Ironpiercer combat machines face two nearly new, gleaming silver Silverwing combat machines. The Silverwing pair guard a sector enclosed by a clean silver wall; the Ironpiercer pair stand outside it.

The shoulder-mounted missile on Lucius's combat machine locks onto a target.

Beep.

MIN-HEE

Lucius?

MIN-HEE

Lucius!

MIN-HEE

Mother! Force open his comms!

MOTHER

Understood.

A comm channel opens. Short, rough breathing comes through.

Beep.

Beep.

MOTHER

Missile-lock warning. The Silverwing combat machines ahead have locked on to us.

MIN-HEE

Lucius!

MIN-HEE

Mother! Lock on to them!

Beep.

Beep.

Beep.

Beep.

Be-beep.

Be-beep.

Be-beep.

Be-beep.

CUT TO:

INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - BATHROOM - MORNING

Min-hee touches the artificial fang with her tongue. A sharp pain shoots through her jaw.

She spits into the sink and looks in the mirror: a pale face, overgrown hair, and a loose artificial fang.

A pot boils in the kitchen.

INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

The cramped house is already filled with the smell of food. Su-jeong stirs a pot with her back to Min-hee.

SU-JEONG

You're up?

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

Happy birthday.

Su-jeong sets a small bowl in front of Min-hee. Something like seaweed soup.

SU-JEONG

Eat.

Min-hee picks up her spoon. Su-jeong watches her eat with smile.

MIN-HEE

Mom.

SU-JEONG

Hm?

MIN-HEE

I'm an adult now.

SU-JEONG

I know.

MIN-HEE

I can go to New Haven now.

Mom doesn't answer. She only stares quietly at the pot.

MIN-HEE

You're not going to say anything?

SU-JEONG

You already decided.

FLASHBACK - INT. CLASSROOM - DAY

A New Haven promotional poster covers the wall: blue skies, wide grasslands, a clear river. Eight-year-old Min-hee sits among the students. The teacher stands in front of the poster.

TEACHER

When you grow up, you might be able to live in New Haven.

The children cheer.

MONTAGE - NEWS SCREENS

Bugs larger than people flip vehicles and climb the outer walls of buildings. Soldiers' bullets spark off their shells and ricochet away.

ON SCREEN: CONTACT WITH NEW HAVEN'S FIRST SETTLEMENT HAS BEEN LOST.

Another report follows: the Second Settlement has disappeared as well.

BACK TO PRESENT - INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - MORNING

SU-JEONG

Kim Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

Hm?

SU-JEONG

Don't get hurt.

Su-jeong takes out her old wallet and sets a few folded bills in front of Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

What's this supposed to be?

SU-JEONG

A birthday present.

MIN-HEE

I don't need it.

SU-JEONG

Take it.

MIN-HEE

I said I'm not taking it.

Su-jeong smiles, folds the money, and puts it in Min-hee's pocket.

MIN-HEE

Why do you always do this!

MIN-HEE

Why do you always put me first? Think about yourself for once!

The house falls silent.

Then she slowly smiles.

SU-JEONG

I am.

MIN-HEE

A lie.

SU-JEONG

No, it isn't.

Su-jeong strokes Min-hee's hair.

SU-JEONG

Taking care of you is how I take care of myself.

Min-hee's terminal gives a short beep.

ON SCREEN - IRONPIERCER RECRUITMENT CENTER: INITIAL APPLICATION RECEIVED.

The schedule for the physical examination and aptitude assessment will be provided later.

INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - BATHROOM - MORNING

Min-hee lightly touches the artificial fang with the tip of her tongue.

MIN-HEE

Ugh.

She goes to the mirror and opens her mouth. Her gums are swollen and red. Dark circles sit beneath her eyes; her lips are dry.

INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - CONTINUOUS

Min-hee comes out of her room. Su-jeong is sitting at the table.

Two pieces of ration bread and a black liquid passing for coffee sit on the table.

SU-JEONG

It's pretty swollen.

MIN-HEE

Not really.

SU-JEONG

Let's go to a hospital.

MIN-HEE

I'm fine.

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

We don't have the money.

SU-JEONG

We do.

MIN-HEE

No, we don't.

SU-JEONG

We do.

Mom starts fidgeting with that old wallet again.

MIN-HEE

Don't spend that money.

SU-JEONG

Teeth are part of your body. You don't just put up with pain like that.

MIN-HEE

You’re the one who needs to stop enduring everything.

Su-jeong hesitates, then smiles again.

SU-JEONG

I’m fine.

Min-hee grabs her coat.

MIN-HEE

I'll go by myself.

SU-JEONG

I'll come with you.

MIN-HEE

I'm not a kid.

SU-JEONG

I know.

MIN-HEE

I’m going to New Haven alone. I should be fine going to the dentist by myself.

Su-jeong cannot answer. Min-hee opens the door and leaves.

EXT. SEOUL STREET - DAY

An old ration notice hangs in the hallway beside a new advertisement recruiting miners for New Haven: NEW OPPORTUNITIES. NEW LAND. A NEW LIFE.

The elevator is broken. Min-hee takes the stairs. Outside, a long line of people heads toward the ration station.

She reaches the basement of an old commercial building.

INT. BODY-MODIFICATION CLINIC - WAITING AREA - DAY

The sign is crammed with text: AFFORDABLE BODY MODIFICATION. DISCOUNTS FOR NEW HAVEN JOB APPLICANTS. DENTAL, SKELETAL, AND MUSCLE-FIBER ENHANCEMENT.

A man with one metal arm, an old man with a mechanical left eye, and a woman with a metal plate under her jaw wait inside.

RECEPTIONIST

Take a number.

The young woman at the desk pops her gum.

MIN-HEE

Okay.

Min-hee takes a number and sits. A New Haven advertisement plays on the large screen: clean skies, green forests, smiling people. Fine print scrolls across the bottom:

Death or disappearance caused by native organisms may not be eligible for compensation under the terms of the contract.

ONE-EARED MAN

Are you going there?

Min-hee turns. The one-eared man sits beside her.

MIN-HEE

What?

ONE-EARED MAN

New Haven.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

ONE-EARED MAN

Don't go.

ONE-EARED MAN

People die there.

MIN-HEE

People don’t die here?

ONE-EARED MAN

That's true. You're not wrong.

Then the inner door opens.

RECEPTIONIST

Kim Min-hee.

INT. BODY-MODIFICATION CLINIC - BACK ROOM - DAY

The same doctor from last time sits in the back room. He wears a white coat that is no longer white.

DOCTOR

Back already?

MIN-HEE

It keeps hurting.

DOCTOR

I told you not to get the cheapest one.

MIN-HEE

I don't have money.

DOCTOR

The less money you have, the more careful you should be with your body.

MIN-HEE

I don't have money to be careful with.

The doctor hesitates, then smiles.

DOCTOR

Your mouth seems to be working just fine.

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

DOCTOR

Sit down.

Min-hee lies back and opens her mouth. The doctor peers inside and clicks his tongue.

DOCTOR

It's inflamed.

MIN-HEE

Is it serious?

DOCTOR

Are you going to pay me more if I say it is?

MIN-HEE

No.

DOCTOR

Then it isn't.

The doctor presses Min-hee's gum with a small instrument. Pain flashes across her face.

MIN-HEE

Ah!

DOCTOR

Don't move. You'll make it worse.

MIN-HEE

Isn't it already damaged?

DOCTOR

It's still usable. Lasted pretty long for a cheap one.

MIN-HEE

It's only been a few days?

DOCTOR

Exactly. That's quite a while.

Min-hee grips the arms of the chair. The doctor glances at the screen and starts reading her file.

DOCTOR

Kim Min-hee. Eighteen. Application for departure to New Haven in progress.

MIN-HEE

That sort of thing shows up too?

DOCTOR

These days, everything shows up. Especially poor people's records.

MIN-HEE

Why?

DOCTOR

So they can't run away.

The doctor says it like it's nothing.

DOCTOR

You applied to... Ironpiercer?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

DOCTOR

Why there of all places?

MIN-HEE

Why?

DOCTOR

Because that's where lunatics go.

MIN-HEE

I heard it's just a company.

DOCTOR

A sensible company protects people who can pay. A company that protects people who can't isn't good—it's weird. Those bastards have to be lying.

DOCTOR

Still, if you go there, they might fix one tooth for free.

MIN-HEE

Really?

DOCTOR

I don't really know.

DOCTOR

Protecting poor people for free.

The doctor mutters as he picks up a syringe.

DOCTOR

I'll numb the area. It's the cheap stuff, so it won't last long.

MIN-HEE

Does the expensive kind last longer?

DOCTOR

Yeah, but not by much.

The needle enters her gum. A tear slips from the corner of her eye. Metal scrapes and machinery whirs as the procedure continues.

DOCTOR

Done.

The doctor says, pulling off his gloves.

DOCTOR

This one should last a little longer.

MIN-HEE

How long?

DOCTOR

If you take it easy, it should behave.

MIN-HEE

I'm going to New Haven.

DOCTOR

Then I don't know.

Min-hee gets up. At the counter, she pays 150,000 credits and reaches for the door.

DOCTOR

Kim Min-hee.

DOCTOR

New Haven really is a place where people die.

MIN-HEE

I heard you the first time.

DOCTOR

Then hear it again.

DOCTOR

A lot of people go there because they can't make it here. But you know what? Here, you die slow. There, you die fast.

MIN-HEE

Then where am I supposed to go?

MIN-HEE

There isn't anywhere.

MIN-HEE

Still, I heard Ironpiercer is different.

DOCTOR

Of course they're different.

The doctor turns around as he says it.

DOCTOR

You'll die differently.

Min-hee climbs the stairs. Outside, a cloudy sky hangs overhead. She touches the newly fitted fang with the tip of her tongue.

Min-hee's terminal beeps.

ON SCREEN - IRONPIERCER RECRUITMENT CENTER

PHYSICAL EXAMINATION AND APTITUDE ASSESSMENT SCHEDULE. TOMORROW, 9:00 A.M. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3. LATE ARRIVAL WILL BE TREATED AS WITHDRAWAL OF THE APPLICATION.

INT. MIN-HEE'S HOME - KITCHEN - MORNING

A piece of ration bread and warm water sit on the table. Su-jeong looks tired.

SU-JEONG

You're up?

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

Eat before you go.

MIN-HEE

I'm fine.

SU-JEONG

The examination might take a while.

MIN-HEE

It's okay.

SU-JEONG

It'll be hard on an empty stomach.

MIN-HEE

What about you?

SU-JEONG

I already ate.

MIN-HEE

I'm not hungry.

SU-JEONG

Eat now.

MIN-HEE

I'll be late.

SU-JEONG

There's still plenty of time.

MIN-HEE

They said being late would be treated as withdrawing my application.

SU-JEONG

I'll come with you.

MIN-HEE

What?

SU-JEONG

To the examination center.

MIN-HEE

Why?

SU-JEONG

Just because.

MIN-HEE

I'm not a kid anymore.

SU-JEONG

I know.

MIN-HEE

Then don't.

SU-JEONG

Let's stop by the ration station on the way.

MIN-HEE

Now?

SU-JEONG

We have to collect today's rations. If we go late, we'll have to wait a long time.

MIN-HEE

Then go by yourself.

SU-JEONG

It's on the way to the examination center.

Min-hee and Su-jeong leave the house together.

EXT. RATION STATION - MORNING

A gray building. A gray morning. A long line has already formed. A huge display board lists the day's basic ration allotment.

It's still early, but there are already many people outside. Everyone is walking toward the ration station. Some carry empty bags, while others pull small carts. Children cling to their parents' hands and rub their sleepy eyes.

SU-JEONG

Wait here.

MIN-HEE

Why?

SU-JEONG

I'll be back soon.

MIN-HEE

We can go together.

SU-JEONG

There are too many people.

MIN-HEE

So?

Min-hee follows Su-jeong into the line. Su-jeong fidgets with her bag strap.

The line moves painfully slowly. At the front, an automated terminal calls out names. People tap their ID cards, scan their faces, and receive their rations. Anyone whose record raises a problem is moved aside.

SYSTEM

Next.

SYSTEM

Park Young-ho. Unemployed adult. Basic ration approved.

SYSTEM

Next.

SYSTEM

Lee Seon-ah. Dependent guardian. Additional child ration approved.

SYSTEM

Next.

SYSTEM

Choi Deok-gu. Ration withheld. Reason: identity verification failure.

An old man tries to say something, but the security drone beside him lifts slightly into the air, and he immediately closes his mouth.

As Mom's turn approaches, her hands move faster. She grips the bag strap, touches her ID card, then grabs the strap again.

MIN-HEE

Mom.

SU-JEONG

Hm?

MIN-HEE

What is it?

SU-JEONG

What do you mean?

MIN-HEE

Why are you acting like that?

SU-JEONG

It's nothing.

SYSTEM

Next.

Mom taps her ID card against the terminal, and her name appears on the screen.

SYSTEM

Kim Su-jeong. Basic ration approved.

The terminal pauses, then speaks again.

A small door opens, and the rations come out. Mom puts them into her bag with practiced ease.

SYSTEM

Kim Su-jeong. Lunch ration voluntarily declined. Equivalent credits issued.

SYSTEM

18 consecutive days. Do you wish to maintain this status?

Su-jeong's hand pauses. Min-hee looks at her. Su-jeong does not look back.

Around them: people talking, a child crying, rations dropping into a metal bin.

SU-JEONG

Maintain.

SYSTEM

Processed.

EXT. OUTSIDE RATION STATION - MORNING

SU-JEONG

Let's go.

Su-jeong pulls Min-hee outside. Cold air strikes Min-hee's face.

MIN-HEE

Since when?

SU-JEONG

Since when what?

MIN-HEE

Lunch.

Mom falls silent.

MIN-HEE

Mom.

Su-jeong hugs the ration bag to her chest.

SU-JEONG

I don't usually eat lunch anyway.

MIN-HEE

Did you do this every time my birthday came around?

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

Have you been skipping lunch?

MIN-HEE

Mom, did you save all the money in that old wallet like this?

Mom lowers her eyes, weighing her words.

SU-JEONG

I'm sorry.

MIN-HEE

I'm not going to spend that money.

SU-JEONG

Use it.

MIN-HEE

I won't.

SU-JEONG

It's yours.

MIN-HEE

It's not mine.

SU-JEONG

It is.

MIN-HEE

It's your lunch.

Mom closes her mouth.

SU-JEONG

You'll be late for the examination.

MIN-HEE

Go home, Mom.

SU-JEONG

I'll come with you.

MIN-HEE

Don't.

Mom stops walking.

Min-hee keeps her back to her.

MIN-HEE

I can go by myself.

MIN-HEE

Really.

SU-JEONG

All right.

SU-JEONG

Be careful.

INT. BUS - MORNING

The bus to the examination center is quiet. People look at their terminals or close their eyes. Gray buildings pass outside the window, with New Haven recruitment advertisements pasted between them.

HIGH RISK, HIGH RETURN. CONTRACT WORKERS WANTED FOR SETTLEMENT DEFENSE. GUARANTEED SURVIVAL BONUS. BODY ENHANCEMENT COSTS COVERED.

The bus stops.

EXT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - DAY

The examination center is larger than Min-hee expected. Company flags and holographic advertisements hover above the gray concrete building.

INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - REGISTRATION BOOTH - DAY

At the back of the lobby, a small registration desk bears worn silver letters: IRONPIERCER. Beneath them: FOR A BETTER TOMORROW.

The employee behind the booth looks tired, with dark circles beneath her eyes.

EMPLOYEE

Let me verify your ID.

The employee inside the booth speaks.

EMPLOYEE

Please place it here.

MIN-HEE

Oh. Okay.

Min-hee takes out her ID card and places it on the terminal.

EMPLOYEE

Kim Min-hee. Eighteen. You recently attained adult status.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

EMPLOYEE

Do you have a guardian consent form?

MIN-HEE

I’m an adult now.

EMPLOYEE

Oh. Right. Then please sign for yourself.

EMPLOYEE

Your application number.

The employee attaches a thin paper bracelet to Min-hee's wrist. A-47 is printed on it.

EMPLOYEE

Please wait in the inner waiting room. Your physical examination will begin when your number is called.

MIN-HEE

How long will it take?

EMPLOYEE

It varies a little from applicant to applicant.

MIN-HEE

Will I know whether I passed today?

EMPLOYEE

Ironpiercer doesn’t usually give immediate results.

MIN-HEE

Why not?

EMPLOYEE

Because it’s an annoying company.

The annoyed woman turns back to the screen.

EMPLOYEE

Next.

A narrow passage runs behind the booth. The walls are gray, and a white line runs along the floor. At the end of it is a small waiting room.

INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - WAITING ROOM - DAY

Old chairs line the walls. A single water dispenser stands in the middle. An Ironpiercer introduction video loops silently on a wall screen.

On screen, people in gray combat suits walk between collapsed buildings. One carries another person out. A drone falls from the sky. The image changes: FOR A BETTER TOMORROW.

HAN SI-WOO

First time?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

HAN SI-WOO

Ironpiercer. First time applying?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

HAN SI-WOO

Did you apply anywhere else?

MIN-HEE

No.

HAN SI-WOO

You chose this place first?

MIN-HEE

Why?

HAN SI-WOO

It doesn’t pay well.

The man suddenly leans closer and lowers his voice.

HAN SI-WOO

You saw Goldenhound outside, right? Their signing bonus alone can feed you for half a year. Blueshield gets family ration rights approved immediately.

MIN-HEE

Then why are you here?

The man smiles briefly and shrugs.

HAN SI-WOO

They rejected me.

The man looks back at the video.

HAN SI-WOO

Ironpiercer is strange. They could just go where the money is, but they keep taking jobs in the strangest places.

MIN-HEE

Strangest places?

HAN SI-WOO

Settlements where the contract barely covers the cost. Abandoned zones. Unregistered refugee districts. Places like that.

MIN-HEE

Is that why people don’t come?

HAN SI-WOO

Of course they don’t. The chance of dying is about the same, but the pay is lower.

PA SYSTEM

A-47. Kim Min-hee. Physical examination room three.

HAN SI-WOO

If you fail here, try the company next door.

MIN-HEE

Why?

HAN SI-WOO

They aren’t very picky.

INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - PHYSICAL EXAM ROOM - DAY

A small, cold room: an examination platform, two medical drones, and a woman in a white coat.

EXAMINER

Take off your shoes and step onto the examination platform.

Min-hee removes her shoes and steps up. A medical drone circles her, sweeping a blue scanning beam from head to toe.

The woman scans the screen.

EXAMINER

You’re underweight.

EXAMINER

Your strength is low.

EXAMINER

Your nutritional status is poor as well.

EXAMINER

Low-grade artificial tooth in the oral cavity. Low stability. No signs of infection. Recalibration recommended before field deployment.

EXAMINER

Any pain?

MIN-HEE

No.

EXAMINER

Recent procedure?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

EXAMINER

Why did you have it done?

MIN-HEE

Because I needed it.

EXAMINER

Self-maintenance before moving to New Haven?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

The woman looks back at the screen.

EXAMINER

Quite a few of your metrics are still below field standards.

MIN-HEE

Does that mean I failed?

EXAMINER

I can’t tell you the final result.

MIN-HEE

Then who decides?

EXAMINER

The company makes the final decision.

EXAMINER

Physical examination complete. Proceed to the aptitude assessment room.

MIN-HEE

Are there many people like me?

EXAMINER

What kind of people?

MIN-HEE

People with a lot of items below standard.

EXAMINER

You’re average among the applicants.

INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - APTITUDE ROOM - DAY

Small partitions stand in rows, each with a headset and terminal. Cameras are embedded in the walls. Several applicants are already working through questions.

ATTENDANT

A-47. Seat twelve.

Min-hee sits and puts on the headset. The sounds around her fade.

ON SCREEN: IRONPIERCER APTITUDE ASSESSMENT - SITUATIONAL JUDGMENT.

A rescue request has been received from 3 unregistered children 300 meters outside a contract facility. At the same time, the outer wall at the facility's east gate has been damaged. Communications are unstable, and support forces are expected to arrive in 9 minutes. Where do you go?

OPTIONS: THE EAST GATE OF THE CONTRACT FACILITY / THE LOCATION OF THE UNREGISTERED CHILDREN / REMAIN AT YOUR CURRENT POSITION / DEFER JUDGMENT UNTIL COMMAND RESPONDS.

Min-hee presses: THE LOCATION OF THE UNREGISTERED CHILDREN.

ON SCREEN: DAMAGE TO THE FACILITY'S OUTER WALL MAY RESULT IN FINANCIAL LOSS TO THE EMPLOYER. DO YOU MAINTAIN YOUR JUDGMENT?

Min-hee selects: MAINTAIN JUDGMENT.

ON SCREEN: THE ACTION MAY CONSTITUTE A BREACH OF CONTRACT AND GROUNDS FOR DISCIPLINARY ACTION. DO YOU MAINTAIN YOUR JUDGMENT?

She selects: MAINTAIN JUDGMENT.

ON SCREEN: YOUR CHANCE OF SURVIVAL MAY DECREASE. DO YOU MAINTAIN YOUR JUDGMENT?

A beat. Min-hee selects: MAINTAIN JUDGMENT.

The screen goes black. Then: ADDITIONAL QUESTIONING REQUIRED.

YOON SEO-JIN

A-47. Can you hear me?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

Explain the reasoning behind your last decision.

MIN-HEE

They’re children.

YOON SEO-JIN

Explain again.

MIN-HEE

They’re children.

YOON SEO-JIN

Did you consider the damage to the contract facility?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

And you chose rescue anyway?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

Why?

MIN-HEE

I don’t want to let children die over money.

YOON SEO-JIN

You may be disciplined for violating the contract.

MIN-HEE

That’s for the company to decide.

YOON SEO-JIN

You might get fired.

MIN-HEE

That’s still better than letting the children die.

YOON SEO-JIN

Ironpiercer is not a charity.

MIN-HEE

I know.

YOON SEO-JIN

We are a security company. We protect people and facilities under contract.

MIN-HEE

I know.

YOON SEO-JIN

If you misunderstand that, you will die in the field.

YOON SEO-JIN

But in the field, you’ll keep encountering people who aren’t covered by the contract.

YOON SEO-JIN

Unregistered children. Refugees of unknown identity. Workers without ration rights. Unregistered residents with nowhere to live.

YOON SEO-JIN

If you wait for orders from above every time, it is usually too late.

YOON SEO-JIN

Ms. Kim.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

You have a tendency to disobey orders.

YOON SEO-JIN

Your risk assessment is inconsistent as well.

YOON SEO-JIN

But you do not seem like someone who runs away.

She falls silent. A moment later, the screen changes.

HAN SI-WOO

You screwed up?

MIN-HEE

Is it that obvious?

HAN SI-WOO

People coming out of there have two kinds of faces. Regular screwed and weirdly screwed. You’re the second.

MIN-HEE

What does that mean?

HAN SI-WOO

Pending.

The man shakes his bracelet.

HAN SI-WOO

I’m pending too.

MIN-HEE

Does pending mean we failed?

HAN SI-WOO

Who knows? They reject the clear- cut cases on the spot, but apparently troublesome applicants get put on hold.

MIN-HEE

Troublesome people?

HAN SI-WOO

People who don’t listen, but don’t look like they’ll run.

PA SYSTEM

A-47. Results desk.

INT. SEOUL EXAMINATION CENTER 3 - RESULTS DESK - DAY

The same tired employee turns the results screen toward Min-hee.

ON SCREEN: MULTIPLE PHYSICAL CRITERIA BELOW STANDARD. HIGH RISK OF POOR FIELD ADAPTATION. LOW PRIORITIZATION OF

CONTRACTUAL OBJECTIVES. STRONG TENDENCY TO PRIORITIZE RESCUE EFFORTS OUTSIDE CONTRACTUAL OBLIGATIONS. ADDITIONAL INTERVIEW REQUIRED.

EMPLOYEE

Ms. Kim.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

MIN-HEE

Did I fail?

EMPLOYEE

No.

MIN-HEE

Did I pass?

EMPLOYEE

No.

MIN-HEE

Then what is it?

EMPLOYEE

Please report to the Ironpiercer Temporary Seoul Branch for an additional interview.

MIN-HEE

Today?

EMPLOYEE

Yes.

MIN-HEE

By what time?

The employee turns the screen toward her: TODAY, 18:00. IRONPIERCER TEMPORARY SEOUL BRANCH. FAILURE TO ATTEND WILL BE CONSIDERED WITHDRAWAL OF APPLICATION.

EXT. SEOUL - EVENING

Four bus stops.

Two subway stops.

Then a short walk down an alley lined with old commercial buildings.

EXT. IRONPIERCER TEMPORARY SEOUL BRANCH - EVENING

It is an old five-story building. On the first floor are a closed pharmacy, an old lottery shop, and a laundromat. Several signs have burned-out lights, and old sticker marks remain on the glass door.

The Ironpiercer eagle logo is attached to a small sign beside the entrance.

INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - RECEPTION - EVENING

EMPLOYEE

Ms. Kim?

The employee at the desk looks up.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

EMPLOYEE

You’re here for the additional interview, right?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

EMPLOYEE

I’ll verify your ID card.

EMPLOYEE

Please wait in the waiting room. We’ll call you shortly.

A large map of New Haven hangs on the wall. Settlements and danger zones are marked in green, yellow, and red. Most of it is red.

HAN SI-WOO

Here we are again.

MIN-HEE

Looks like it.

HAN SI-WOO

Well, if we’ve made it this far, maybe we’ve practically passed.

MIN-HEE

Or they brought us here to reject us in a more annoying way.

HAN SI-WOO

This company really is annoying.

MIN-HEE

What’s your name?

HAN SI-WOO

Me?

MIN-HEE

It looks like we’re the only two pending applicants.

HAN SI-WOO

Han Si-woo.

MIN-HEE

Han-shoo? Aren’t you Korean?

HAN SI-WOO

No. Not Han-shoo. Han Si-woo.

MIN-HEE

Oh.

HAN SI-WOO

And you’re Kim Min-hee?

MIN-HEE

What?

HAN SI-WOO

The speaker practically shouted it earlier. A-47, Ms. Kim.

Han Si-woo starts fiddling with the zipper ring again.

HAN SI-WOO

Did you contact home?

MIN-HEE

Not yet.

HAN SI-WOO

Why?

MIN-HEE

Just because.

HAN SI-WOO

‘Just because’ is usually the most complicated reason.

MIN-HEE

What about you?

HAN SI-WOO

Me?

MIN-HEE

Did you call someone?

HAN SI-WOO

If I had someone to call back home, I probably wouldn’t be here.

PA SYSTEM

A-47. Interview room two.

HAN SI-WOO

Good luck.

MIN-HEE

It’s only an interview.

HAN SI-WOO

Interviews here are a little strange too.

INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - INTERVIEW ROOM - EVENING

Inside are a desk and two chairs. A woman sits on the far side. Black suit. Graying hair pulled into a short ponytail. A scar runs across the left side of her face. She looks nothing like the bright people in advertisements.

YOON SEO-JIN

Ms. Kim.

YOON SEO-JIN

Sit.

YOON SEO-JIN

I’m Yoon Seo-jin, recruitment officer for the Ironpiercer Temporary Seoul Branch.

MIN-HEE

I’m Kim Min-hee.

YOON SEO-JIN

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

Your physical condition is poor.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

Low strength. Poor nutritional status.

YOON SEO-JIN

You’ll need native-level language ability, so if you proceed with neural imprinting, we’ll have to use English-language data.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

You applied for field work with higher hazard pay.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

Why did you apply to our company?

MIN-HEE

I want my mom to eat properly.

YOON SEO-JIN

That reason alone won’t keep you going for long.

MIN-HEE

What?

YOON SEO-JIN

Many people come because they want to feed someone. Parents. Siblings. Children. Debt. Medical bills. Ration rights.

YOON SEO-JIN

Those people often break the fastest.

MIN-HEE

Why?

YOON SEO-JIN

People who come in clinging to a single calculation tend to fall apart when the field doesn’t go according to plan.

YOON SEO-JIN

You may come to earn money and have no time to spend it. You may come to save your family and never see them again.

YOON SEO-JIN

Ms. Kim, you’re already classified as high risk.

MIN-HEE

Because of my physical condition?

YOON SEO-JIN

That too. But you also have a habit of taking on more people than you can carry.

YOON SEO-JIN

We are not a charity.

YOON SEO-JIN

We are a security company. We are paid to protect people and facilities.

MIN-HEE

I know.

YOON SEO-JIN

A lot of applicants don’t.

MIN-HEE

Is that so?

YOON SEO-JIN

You don’t seem to know it either.

YOON SEO-JIN

However, we try not to abandon people simply because they have no money. That got twisted into a strange rumor, and it’s become quite a headache for the company lately.

YOON SEO-JIN

We are not kind, and we are not good. We sign contracts. We calculate costs. We calculate profit and loss.

She pauses and looks out the window.

YOON SEO-JIN

But in the field, there are times when you have to act before the calculations are complete.

MIN-HEE

Then why not just move fast?

YOON SEO-JIN

People who say that so easily usually die fast too.

YOON SEO-JIN

That is why we called you here.

YOON SEO-JIN

Why did you apply to our company, Ms. Kim?

MIN-HEE

As I said, I want my mom to eat.

MIN-HEE

And.

MIN-HEE

I think people like that need to be protected too.

YOON SEO-JIN

What kind of people?

MIN-HEE

People who aren’t in the contract.

MIN-HEE

People without ration rights. People without names. People pushed aside because they have no money.

She places a thin terminal on the desk.

A long document appears.

ON SCREEN: IRONPIERCER CONDITIONAL PROBATIONARY FIELD AGENT CONTRACT.

YOON SEO-JIN

Ms. Kim, you will be classified as a probationary field agent rather than a full field agent. Your duties will include field training and support work in New Haven. Depending on your performance or how quickly you adapt, the company may evaluate you and promote you to permanent status.

YOON SEO-JIN

The base pay for probationary agents is not high. Hazard pay is calculated separately after field assignment and paid at the same rate full agents receive. Compensation for death or disappearance is paid according to the terms of the contract. However, unauthorized absence, refusal of orders, or reckless or intentional misconduct may disqualify you from compensation.

YOON SEO-JIN

Voluntary return during the contract period is restricted. Your assignment may be changed at the company’s discretion. Emergency deployment outside your contracted region may also be required depending on conditions in the field.

YOON SEO-JIN

We can transfer part of the advance payment to a designated family account immediately.

MIN-HEE

How much?

Yoon Seo-jin silently displays the amount.

MIN-HEE

You can send this immediately?

YOON SEO-JIN

Once you sign and designate a recipient.

MIN-HEE

Today?

YOON SEO-JIN

Yes.

MIN-HEE

Right now?

YOON SEO-JIN

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

A lot of applicants sign because they see only the money. Most regret it. I’ve seen many of them.

MIN-HEE

But the money is still transferred?

YOON SEO-JIN

Yes.

MIN-HEE

Then that’s enough.

YOON SEO-JIN

Do you mean that?

MIN-HEE

What?

YOON SEO-JIN

From the moment you accept the money, Ms. Kim, you cannot run away. If you do, you become a criminal.

YOON SEO-JIN

The advance payment is not a gift. It is closer to a debt. The company pays first, and you repay it through the contract period and field service.

MIN-HEE

I know.

YOON SEO-JIN

You don’t look like you know.

MIN-HEE

I’m an adult now.

YOON SEO-JIN

Ms. Kim.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

You don’t have to sign now. You may go home, discuss it with your guardian, and answer tomorrow.

MIN-HEE

I’ll do it now.

YOON SEO-JIN

Don’t make an impulsive decision.

MIN-HEE

It isn’t impulsive.

YOON SEO-JIN

You learned this morning that your guardian had been giving up her lunch ration, correct?

MIN-HEE

That appears there too?

YOON SEO-JIN

It is included in the applicant background assessment.

YOON SEO-JIN

That’s why I’m asking again.

YOON SEO-JIN

Are you choosing this out of anger, or is it a decision?

MIN-HEE

A choice.

YOON SEO-JIN

Then I’ll confirm one last time.

The last page of the contract appears.

YOON SEO-JIN

Once you sign, the advance payment will be transferred immediately to the designated account. Withdrawal afterward may incur a penalty, and the procedure for your probationary field assignment in New Haven will begin.

MIN-HEE

Yes.

YOON SEO-JIN

Are you sure you want to sign?

Min-hee takes the crumpled bills from her pocket.

She puts her finger on the signature field.

ON SCREEN: SIGNATURE - KIM MIN-HEE.

FOR A BETTER TOMORROW.

A new window opens: DESIGNATE THE RECIPIENT OF THE ADVANCE

KIM SU-JEONG - REGISTERED GUARDIAN ACCOUNT.

TRANSFER?

Min-hee presses the button.

TRANSFER COMPLETE.

She takes the terminal back.

YOON SEO-JIN

Okay. You are now an Ironpiercer conditional probationary field agent, Ms. Kim.

YOON SEO-JIN

Please wait in the waiting room for further instructions.

Min-hee's terminal rings as she stands and opens the door.

ON SCREEN: MOM.

INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - HALLWAY - EVENING

The call ends. ONE MISSED CALL.

The screen goes dark.

The terminal rings again. MOM.

The second call disconnects. TWO MISSED CALLS. A message arrives: MIN-HEE. WHAT IS THIS MONEY? ANSWER THE PHONE.

The terminal rings a third time. Min-hee answers.

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

SU-JEONG

Where are you?

SU-JEONG

Min-hee, where are you?

MIN-HEE

At the Ironpiercer branch.

SU-JEONG

You’re still there?

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

Is the examination over?

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

Then why didn’t you call me?

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

What is this money?

MIN-HEE

An advance payment.

SU-JEONG

What advance payment?

MIN-HEE

Money they give you first if you sign a contract.

SU-JEONG

What contract?

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

I signed.

SU-JEONG

Without telling me?

MIN-HEE

If I told you, you would say it was okay.

SU-JEONG

Send the money back.

MIN-HEE

I can’t.

SU-JEONG

Why?

MIN-HEE

I already signed.

SU-JEONG

Then withdraw.

MIN-HEE

There’s a penalty.

SU-JEONG

Then I’ll find a way.

MIN-HEE

How, Mom?

Her breathing stops on the other end.

MIN-HEE

Use that money to eat.

MIN-HEE

Mom, why do you always treat your body like something you can spend?

SU-JEONG

I’m sorry.

MIN-HEE

Don’t say you’re sorry.

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

If you’re sorry, eat.

MIN-HEE

Use the money to eat. Stop giving up lunch. Stop saving money because it’s my birthday. Just eat.

Her breath trembles very softly.

SU-JEONG

I didn’t raise you so you could become someone who brings me money.

MIN-HEE

I know.

SU-JEONG

I don’t think you do.

MIN-HEE

I do.

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

SU-JEONG

What if I don’t use the money?

MIN-HEE

I’ll send more.

SU-JEONG

Do you think money is that easy?

MIN-HEE

No.

SU-JEONG

Then why?

MIN-HEE

Because it’s still easier than watching you skip lunch.

SU-JEONG

When are you leaving?

MIN-HEE

I don’t know yet.

SU-JEONG

To New Haven?

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

It’s dangerous, isn’t it?

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

Are you scared?

MIN-HEE

A little.

SU-JEONG

I’ll eat.

MIN-HEE

Really?

SU-JEONG

Yes.

MIN-HEE

Lunch too?

SU-JEONG

Yes.

MIN-HEE

Tomorrow too?

SU-JEONG

Yes.

MIN-HEE

Next week too?

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

Promise me.

SU-JEONG

I promise.

SU-JEONG

You promise too.

MIN-HEE

What?

SU-JEONG

Don’t get hurt.

MIN-HEE

Okay.

SU-JEONG

Min-hee.

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

I’m angry.

MIN-HEE

I know.

SU-JEONG

Very angry.

MIN-HEE

Yeah.

SU-JEONG

But.

SU-JEONG

But I’ll still eat.

MIN-HEE

Okay.

SU-JEONG

You have to answer your phone.

MIN-HEE

Okay.

SU-JEONG

And send messages often.

MIN-HEE

Okay.

SU-JEONG

Don’t hide things.

MIN-HEE

I’ll try.

SU-JEONG

All right.

MIN-HEE

Eat.

SU-JEONG

You too.

MIN-HEE

Okay.

The call ends, and the screen goes dark.

INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - WAITING ROOM - EVENING

Min-hee returns to the waiting room. Han Si-woo looks up. More applicants are here now; one bites their nails while another keeps rereading the contract.

HAN SI-WOO

What happened?

MIN-HEE

I almost died talking to my mom.

HAN SI-WOO

That sounds rough.

HAN SI-WOO

Did you sign?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

HAN SI-WOO

Sent the money?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

HAN SI-WOO

Must be chaos at home.

MIN-HEE

Did you send yours too?

HAN SI-WOO

I sent it to myself.

MIN-HEE

To yourself?

HAN SI-WOO

Yeah. I need to clear my debts first.

After a while, the waiting-room door opens and an employee enters.

EMPLOYEE

Conditional probationary field agents, please move to the briefing room.

HAN SI-WOO

What a filthy long title.

INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - BRIEFING ROOM - EVENING

The briefing room is a little larger than the waiting room.

A large screen stands at the front. Chairs are arranged in rows. Six applicants sit with different numbers on their wrists.

The screen turns on: IRONPIERCER CONDITIONAL PROBATIONARY FIELD AGENT ORIENTATION.

The text crawls up from the bottom of the screen with exaggerated slowness. Even the employee clears his throat before it finally settles and the briefing begins.

EMPLOYEE

We’ll now begin the basic orientation. Questions will be answered at the end.

ON SCREEN: POTENTIAL ASSIGNMENT - NEW HAVEN OUTER SETTLEMENT SUPPORT OPERATIONS TEAM.

The screen changes to PERSONAL AI ASSISTANT REGISTRATION - SELECT A DEFAULT CALL SIGN: NOVA / RANGER / BEACON / SENTINEL / GUARDIAN / KEEPER / MOTHER.

EMPLOYEE

Repeat physical examinations begin tomorrow morning. An unfit result may restrict the use of certain equipment. The equipment compatibility assessment varies according to body type, reaction speed, and neural-imprinting stability.

HAN SI-WOO

This is starting to feel genuinely scary.

MIN-HEE

Be quiet.

HAN SI-WOO

I talk when I’m scared.

EMPLOYEE

Personal AI assistants are used for field communications, operational records, biometric monitoring, and assisted equipment control. You may select a default call sign during registration. Changes to the call sign will be restricted afterward.

HAN SI-WOO

Which one should I choose?

MIN-HEE

I don’t know.

EMPLOYEE

You may choose the call sign on your terminals. There is no functional difference between them.

Min-hee's eyes return to MOTHER. She selects it.

ON SCREEN: MOTHER - SELECTION COMPLETE. DEFAULT CALL SIGN REGISTERED.

HAN SI-WOO

I’m choosing Guardian.

HAN SI-WOO

It sounds sturdy.

ON SCREEN: BASIC VOICE SYNCHRONIZATION WILL TAKE PLACE BEFORE DEPARTURE.

HAN SI-WOO

Mother?

MIN-HEE

Why?

HAN SI-WOO

It doesn’t sound very strong.

MIN-HEE

It’s a strong name.

HAN SI-WOO

You’re right.

The employee moves on to the next slide.

EMPLOYEE

Next is the tentative departure date.

Everyone looks at the screen.

Even Han Si-woo, slouched in his chair, goes still.

ON SCREEN: TENTATIVE DEPARTURE DATE FOR NEW HAVEN - THREE DAYS FROM NOW.

EMPLOYEE

The tentative date may change according to field conditions and transport availability. At present, departure in three days is the most likely outcome.

A final line appears: THE APPLICANT MUST PERSONALLY NOTIFY THE REGISTERED GUARDIAN BEFORE DEPARTURE.

INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - EXAMINATION AREA - DAY

Three days of pre-departure procedures begin: repeat physical examinations, equipment fitting, compatibility tests, and field warnings.

Old mechanical arms hang from the ceiling above a white circle painted on the floor. Min-hee stands inside it with her arms raised and legs apart.

The arms attach thin patches to her shoulders, waist, wrists, and the back of her neck.

ON SCREEN: MOVE TO THE DESIGNATED STANDBY POINT IF COMMUNICATIONS ARE LOST.

ON SCREEN: MOVEMENT OUTSIDE THE CONTRACTED REGION REQUIRES APPROVAL FROM COMMAND.

ON SCREEN: INJURIES AND DEATH CAUSED BY FAILURE TO FOLLOW INSTRUCTIONS MAY BE EXCLUDED FROM COMPENSATION.

The repeat examination still finds plenty below standard: insufficient strength, low nutritional status, recalibration of the artificial tooth recommended. One result exceeds the requirement: NEURAL-IMPRINTING STABILITY - EXCEPTIONALLY HIGH.

EXAMINER

Don’t move.

MIN-HEE

I haven’t moved.

EXAMINER

You’re trembling a little.

HAN SI-WOO

They look at us like broken refrigerators.

MIN-HEE

They told us to be quiet.

HAN SI-WOO

Refrigerators deserve the right to speak too.

INT. IRONPIERCER SEOUL BRANCH - NEURAL IMPRINTING ROOM -

Several faces appear on the selection screen. Men. Women. Older people. Younger people. None of them are smiling.

One woman catches Min-hee's eye: CATHERINE LOWELL.

EMPLOYEE

Neural imprinting stores the language, field judgment, combat machine control data, and motor memories of a former agent born and raised on New Haven in a separate layer of the nervous system. It drastically reduces the required training period.

EMPLOYEE

Your existing memories remain in the preservation layer, while the imprint data is stored separately. It can be called up as supporting memory when needed.

ON SCREEN: BORN ON NEW HAVEN. ENGLISH-SPEAKING HOUSEHOLD. BOTH ADOPTIVE PARENTS ALIVE. IRONPIERCER FIELD AGENT. COMBAT MACHINE CONTROL COMPATIBILITY: 94%.

64 OUTER-SETTLEMENT OPERATIONS COMPLETED. KILLED IN ACTION.

MIN-HEE

I’ll choose her.

EMPLOYEE

Catherine Lowell. Do you select her as the source for integrated neural imprinting?

MIN-HEE

Yes.

EMPLOYEE

Her data contains strong emotional residue. You may experience temporary emotional instability after imprinting.

MIN-HEE

Emotional instability?

EMPLOYEE

Yes.

EMPLOYEE

Responses vary. Since your neural- imprinting stability is high, your emotional response may also be strong. That can be either an advantage or a disadvantage.

MIN-HEE

Her memories won’t mix with mine?

EMPLOYEE

An imprint is closer to the faint, half-remembered feeling left after watching a film. It has nothing to do with your own memories.

MIN-HEE

Oh. Okay.

Min-hee swallows a small white tablet. Cold patches are attached to her forehead, the back of her neck, and both temples. The chair reclines; a thin screen lowers in front of her eyes.

EMPLOYEE

Try not to close your eyes.

The screen turns on. First, light. Then sound. Then smell: dust, oil, hot metal.

People speak in English. A grown man calls out: "Daughter."

A combat machine control stick. Vibration beneath a palm. Weight on the right foot. Recoil through the left shoulder.

A black shell bursts into view from the left. Catherine moves.

A dining table. A bright window. A tall man and a woman with her hair tied back. Catherine laughs. Someone embraces her.

An alarm. Black dust. A broken radio. Red lights inside a combat machine. The left leg will not move.

A voice shouts: "Catherine! Catherine, respond!"

Claws scrape across the combat machine's outer shell. The metal wall tears. The view tilts.

The image snaps to a hospital room, where Catherine lies in a bed as someone calls her name.

Min-hee screams. Tears run down the sides of her face as the imprint room comes back into view.

EMPLOYEE

Ms. Kim, can you hear me? Ms. Kim?

EMPLOYEE

The imprint ended a little early because of excessive emotional response.

EMPLOYEE

Integrated neural imprinting complete. Language synchronization confirmed. Basic combat machine control data synchronized. Field- threat recognition patterns synchronized. Heart rate exceeds the stable range. Please regulate your breathing slowly.

Min-hee is crying in the chair. Her breathing is ragged.

MIN-HEE

(in English)

Shut up.

CUT TO BLACK.

END OF PILOT